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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were dogs walking their people beside some sleepy legged ocean you had your smile on for moments like you were playing strip tease and then got nervous about being free you said I wanted to unwrap your presents that you could tell by my eyes and how they seemed to undress you even when you pretended to be baring the most hidden parts of your love I didn't answer your hands as they touched and pressed my leather into submission but I felt them exploring my heart although you said it was my skin you wanted so you could have your very own tattoos but without the burning of your prison _________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I love how you're able to suspend those moments of the passion that lies behind the furtive glance or cool hand. The next second could be wildly out of control. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Raindance..thank you ...it is momentary with the ticking clock behind it.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't answer your hands as they touched and pressed my leather into submission but I felt them exploring my heart And your words explore ours. *S* You've got a gift, my friend... truly. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks so much lady friend |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
there's no submission to be had when urgent meets the press of yearning. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi..oh say it isn't so? thanks babe |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I lurk here to enjoy you often. You never disappoint. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP..thank you ...you bless me with your lurking |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hmmmm...let's see, someone else get the tattoo so I can enjoy it...interesting thought (from a clever mind)...enjoyed |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I always enjoy reading your stuff, Dark Stranger. I think no one does imagery better than you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks amigo.. ______________ chalmette guy, thanks and welcome back to the pipzoo in blue [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-12-2009 09:10 AM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark, Your poem wants me to jump and down and wave my arms while yelling, "I have dogs!" as if this puts me in some volunteer-for-service category. You know how I love this because I am telling you now. I love this. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...bring them along..and some blindfolds for them too, (for the bright sun at the beach) thanks lil one |
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