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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-03-07 12:23 PM

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-03-07 12:32 PM

As they say, "The 'Eyes' have it!" ~ or should that be "The 'Ayes' have it"? lol

I would wager that behind your shades, we'd see your own "Capturing Eyes".

Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2009-03-07 02:13 PM

ouu! The picture gave me some chills!

ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-03-07 03:49 PM

superb Bill, the photo is scary and made me think of some Tim Burton Picture...Thanks for the beautiful poem.

yann

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2009-03-07 05:56 PM

nice read

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-03-07 06:46 PM

Yo Bill,

It's a nice poem, and I like the eyes.

Bobby

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2009-03-07 09:06 PM

Yes I'd say the eyes have it Bill

You penned it well, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

7 posted 2009-03-07 10:00 PM

Fantastic Bill, and I believe you've shown a darker side of your romance hitherto unplumbed.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2009-03-07 10:23 PM

Bill

I like your poetry and the words are beautiful. The eyes are scary

Ariana

Noel
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 42
West Coast

9 posted 2009-03-07 10:35 PM

This is gorgeous and presented so elegantly.

Outstanding poetry, all of it!!

I'm so glad to be here among so many talented writers. Just beautiful, truly.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2009-03-08 08:04 PM

As long as the shadows are tender, dear Bill, it won't be too chilly ...
The picture, though frightening, is really magnetic!
Certainly darkness sometimes insinuates the brightest romance.

Beautifully written.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2009-03-08 08:12 PM

That's a deeply mystic lady you've become enamoured with Bill.

The picture and the words are married to each other in a different way opening a different school of thought.

Very nice indeed.

Eric

Sharon Rose
Member

since 2008-11-03

Posts 51

12 posted 2009-03-09 10:22 PM

Bill

Loved the poetry, WOW! scary eyes.

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