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speaking in tongues |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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crumpets lightly salted with cream breakfast from hummingbird nectar bleeds into lunch and dinners served among crumpled linens mouths yawning with invitation receive tangy-ripe flavor rewards spilling over chest and breasts sating thirsts that remain forever only momentarily satisfied laughter deftly punctuating run-on sentences and promises bookmarked in morning's sultry musk - Alison |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
It must be the lumpy oatmeal.....lol  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's either that or the bourbon balls |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delicious, sensual visions. Must be the cold outside ...  Sei un bocconcino delizioso... sorry, speaking in the one tongue in which this thought manifested  Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..always the gourmet..enjoyed it |
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pontyjim Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40Ontario, Canada |
Fantastic images Alison! Good poem. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very well written Alison. You are a fantastic poet. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Alisojn, this beautiful with a perfect and poetic choice of words, I will read it more. yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"mouths yawning with invitation" excellent! M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Delicious words here, Alison. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Food (ahem...) for thought, salivating as always over your writing... j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alison - you surely have a way with words. Nice different write... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all for taking the time to read and reply to my poem. I can't tell you how often you make me smile. With love, Alison |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
I'm smelling the coffee. What a perfect morning blend, and such a treat to read. |
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