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Verve
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2009-03-07 03:04 AM

The winds slowly glided in,

Whispering gently the sound of distant chimes.

A sudden flash of light,

Dancing wildly through the darkened sky.

Then a clap thundered nearby,

Bellowing deeply way up high.

The heavy clouds burst forth,

Raining down a rhythmic beat.

Somewhere in this starless night,

The symphony is now complete.

"Le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne connait point.
The heart has its reasons of which reason knows nothing."

~ Blaise Pascal ~

tao power
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since 2009-02-24

Posts 109

1 posted 2009-03-07 04:50 AM

When I read this poem there was a thunderstorm outside, so it was fitting.

I imagine Frasier Crane delivering this poem for some reason.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-03-07 06:11 AM

I see you are one of the first Pip members, but I have not seen much of you. Nice that you are posting again.

I love rain and thunder and for me the symphony is complete here, just as you say.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

pontyjim
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2009-03-07 07:32 AM

Brilliant. 'nuff said.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2009-03-07 09:30 PM

nice imagery!!

applause!

Noel
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since 2009-03-06

Posts 42
West Coast

5 posted 2009-03-07 10:47 PM

I enjoyed every word of the raindance you wrote.... The chimes blowing in the wind brought your storm to life.

Excellent writing, Verve.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

6 posted 2009-03-29 05:46 AM

Thank you all for your lovely comments!

Isn't the rain just simply a beautiful work of nature? I love it. =)

I have been away for the forums for a long time now. It's nice to drop by again.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

7 posted 2009-03-29 05:46 AM

Thank you all for your lovely comments!

Isn't the rain just simply a beautiful work of nature? I love it. =)

I have been away for the forums for a long time now. It's nice to drop by again.

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

8 posted 2009-06-07 08:16 PM

i love the feelings, the images, the power.
nicely done!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2009-06-08 06:31 AM

Look what the storm blew in...verve!
Your concise, powerful 'quick' imagery fits a thunder storm perfectly! Bravo!
Please visit more often.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

10 posted 2009-06-08 07:22 AM

thank u both!! =)

hehehehe... yeah have more time these couple weeks to snoop around the forums and check out my fave poets. =)

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2009-06-13 02:58 PM

I love rain and enjoyed your "storm", Verve,
Ida

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

12 posted 2009-06-13 05:15 PM

It is raining here now.

Verve
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

13 posted 2009-06-15 04:40 PM

Thank you Ida and Icebox, for dropping by. =)

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