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Open Poetry #44
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zaxby
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since 2009-03-05
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0 posted 2009-03-06 02:37 PM

Black, white, flicker, gray,
Now I’m dead, that’s where I’ll stay.
Wish I could have lived life a bit more
But now I’m dead, and that’s the score.

There’s a buzzing, humming, everywhere,
All things from the past I just don’t care.
Floating in plasma, rush to the stars,
No hatred, no pain, I pass planet mars.

Saturn is beautiful, Pluto the end,
The vastness, the cosmos, now is my friend,
Black, white, flicker, gray,
Now I’m dead that’s where I’ll stay.


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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-06 03:11 PM

Stick around, you have some talent for rhyme and humor both. Welcome. Sorry I must have missed your opening post.
zaxby
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2 posted 2009-03-06 03:19 PM

Thanks, this is early stuff I went on a prose bent for awhile now rhyme is rearing its ugly  head, I'll post a newer rhyme piece in awhile.
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