Open Poetry #44 |
and one more, for the road |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dismissal of the missives cast and like a feather scarf's contrast the sacred words taken to own are powerless against the throne. Here--I challenge ye to fence-- an epee or epopee or do you know the difference? I doubt it much--you make no sense. Your words have rhythm and they rhyme, but lack intelligent design and I could dismiss all that but you lack the creative tact of even scores--Gematria. Google that. I'll wait for ya. Dismissals of what you do not know will be the lessons of zero. For words you cast aspersions on were written long before the songs your words allude to, like the gong of taoist chant of runes you cast in syllables, in beat of skin, drumming psalms of sacred sin without the breadth of difference of understanding wisdom's bent scales...you talk reptilain as if a Babylonian, conversing with the Persian wits with Aramaic and Sanskrit version of the truth be told in the true Hebraic code: don't dismiss what you don't know-- and beware of boas, those, are seeded in Carduceus with pagan roots pre-dated, thus-- a sign of healing, Mercury, spat across the skies in seed leaving herbs, and fruit that yield the benefits of all that heal left to women gathering as men go off to war. * * * * * * |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
You're too smart for me. I don't know what any of this means. i'm going to find a dumber poet to be my new favorite. It's hard to read a poem when you have to jump to dictionary.com after every stanza. I feel vaguely offended by this poem. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he you just need to get in there and stir the pot a little don't ya? That's why I love ya, cause you just wouldn't be you otherwise. I love this....ROFL! "scales...you talk reptilain as if a Babylonian, conversing with the Persian wits with Aramaic and Sanskrit" You know how to open both doors with just the right amount of ambiguity don't ya? Me got huge smile on face. Gonna kiss ya next time I see ya. Take care Celeste. Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*smile* the sense of this left me with a smug smile.. the feel of it was gifted to me with a knowing nod... Sometimes you feel words far more than interpret them.. I loved this.. and I love you "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of these days I'm going to sit at your feet, just to listen to the sound of your beat. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Although poetic "jousting" has a long history, especially as intellectual fun in Royal "courts"--attack poetry is not allowed at Pip. I was just having a bit of fun, tao. If you feel that I was having too much fun at your expense, tao, feel free to ask a mod to delete this. I don't mind, and I apologize if I hurt your feelings. But yanno? Sometimes it's worth the extra effort to look stuff up. I just thought you were playing with me by sneezing at my pink boa. (And it's completely understandable if you did--it's why I gave it away.) <--note the auraline *chuckle* Love to all! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Celeste, I hate to say it but I'm afraid most of it was over my head, but thanks for sharing anyway. Lindsay |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
oh...im not offended. and im not jousting. and i wasnt aware that you had a pink boa. I thought you had a troll doll, or a rhododendron or something. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do have troll dolls! Actually, they are sculpted rubber thingies, from scandinavia. I've got a lot of weird stuff. But I guess that's hardly surprising. Anyhow, this ain't nuttin' to fuss over. *peace* |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Can you believe that I actually went to look up "reptilain", so convinced of your infallibility was I. This is rather good yanno. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sheesh. I do make typos. But now I guess it's karenity word. Tell me moonbeam, did I accidentally hit on some metrically correct thing again? (I truly never know.) reptilain...now let me go make up a definition. *laughing* |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Yep you did - it's called "karenbic hexnometer" Actually, seriously you did. Reptilain = prostrate plough salesman *Did you see that: "HEX nometer" gerrit?! Wiccan, magic, spells ... clever eh? lol Oh never mind. *Also, did you see your fame in Teen? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh no... *wince* I got famous? that's it...I'm hiding for another month! *chuckling* Let me know when my month is up. I had my timer surgically removed. gawd I love ya MB. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your month's up, gal... c'mon out of hiding. *G* (and forgive the date fudging... I'm addicted to your magical pen *S*) You make me want to ferret out your inspiration... but truth is... I don't have to know the backstory to appreciate what's on this page! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Have I mentioned before, how much I adore your new "Que sera, sera", "bon vivant", "joie de vivre" photo?!? Truly adorable! ~ and ta think ya got brains in dat purdy head, as well! lol Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you know, I put off reading this for several days because (from a cursory reading of the title) I just did not want to read a drinking song...should have known that you would never have been so obvious...this is magnificent writing...am always so impressed by your level of familiarity with such a variety of subjects and this one is chock full of those impressions...well, anyway, loved this best of all: "in syllables, in beat of skin, drumming psalms of sacred sin without the breadth of difference of understanding wisdom's bent" ...suppose it is because I found the phrase "psalms of sacred sin" fascinating...one request though...more, please... |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Hey Serenity. I'm an old poster here who is back and enjoying this immensely. Although, I am wearing google out trying to figure out all the words. lol "Your words have rhythm and they rhyme, but lack intelligent design" I knew this has to be about me. lol |
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