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Open Poetry #44

by looking at the sky 2

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2009-03-05 11:53 AM

islands in sky,
stranded sun,
rafts of sands,
eyes boats.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2009-03-05 12:11 PM

very cool stuff 1 and 2

Love it!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-03-05 05:05 PM

Beautiful pictures painted with just a few words, yann.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-03-05 05:10 PM

Yo Yann,

This isn't clear to me at all.

Where is the first one?

Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-03-05 05:38 PM

Everything can be created by looking at the sky. I love this one too.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-03-06 02:25 AM

Thanks to you dear friends for your kind comments.

Bobby this poem is just play with words and images. Looking at the sky autorize such imaginary thoughts.

have a great day.

yann

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-03-06 07:18 PM

Smiling, this is cool. I like it very much.

Eric

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2009-03-06 10:40 PM

2islander2 - h'mmmmm, interesting writings #1, and #2...

BC

2islander2
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by the sea

8 posted 2009-03-07 04:15 PM

Thank you ethome for the kind comment.

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

9 posted 2009-03-07 04:15 PM

thanks Bill

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