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Open Poetry #44

by looking at the sky 1

2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-03-05 11:49 AM

On platforms,
no smile,
the sun forgot
its luggage.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-03-05 02:17 PM

hmmmm, got me thinking

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-03-05 05:28 PM

Yo Yann,

Okay, I found the first one.

Where are these platforms, and what are they for?

Bobby

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-03-05 05:37 PM

This is really cute, dear Yann!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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by the sea

4 posted 2009-03-06 02:17 AM

thank you nadthoughts

yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-03-06 02:22 AM

Hi Bobby, imagine these are platforms for train and people don't smile, there is no sun in their heart.
Or looking at the sky imagine that the sun is on a platform of clouds, you may think it has forgotten its luggage...

just poetic thoughts my friend.

thanks for the comment
yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-03-06 02:22 AM

Thank you dear Margherita

have a nice day

yann

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2009-03-06 07:20 PM

I hate it when that happens.

Just tuning in. A neat way to look at it.

Eric

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-03-06 10:39 PM

2islander2 - at times the sun do forget. Nice write...

BC

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-03-07 04:16 PM

Thanks Ethome for the kind comment.

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2009-03-07 04:17 PM

Yes Bill, specially in brittany and england too.

thanks

yann

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