Open Poetry #44 |
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Sweet-Versed Immortality. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
You say my words are beautiful; Thank You, Milady,You are kind. They are... but thoughts; and, in my thoughts, You are always somewhere, there. But, no surprise; for, when I write them, You dance brightly, in my mind, and thus, explains perhaps, why words I rhyme are ever, sweet, and fair. Yet, words I craft, are, but pale shadow of sweet thoughts I hold for You. Such pictures that my heart would paint, cannot be compassed round, with rhyme. Such words do not exist... save, deep within the Soul... it is quite true; and thus, cannot be written here, and I needs must fail... every time. Yet, though pale shadow, they may be, they have sweet virtue; they speak true; and thus, may stand, as Portrait of a Love, soft whispered, from the heart; that cannot not dim, as drifting years unwind... my tiny gift to You, a sweet-versed Immortality; to shine, long after we depart. These Heart-thoughts, echoing down the years; someday, should they be read by chance, will whisper... She was truly loved; indeed, this was a Grand Romance. [This message has been edited by Windhover (03-05-2009 11:13 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your soul whispers so softly ~ so sweetly, of that "Grand Romance". ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww.... she is lucky, to say the least ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Romantic poetry. It just never dies. "Yet, though pale shadow, they may be, they have sweet virtue; they speak true; and thus, may stand, as Portrait of a Love, soft whispered, from the heart; that cannot not dim, as drifting years unwind... my tiny gift to You, a sweet-versed Immortality; to shine, long after we depart. These Heart-thoughts, echoing down the years; someday, should they be read by chance, will whisper... She was truly loved; indeed, this was a Grand Romance." Yep, just never dies and that's a good thing. We all need the high from time to time. Eric |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
The love shines so brightly with each and every word! This is a real gem! |
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