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Reminders |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
Everything that exists Is a constant reminder of you The fog that settles in at dawn Feet wet from early morning dew The birds chirping building a nest Children tumbling in the hay All lovely reminders to me Of your kind and gentle ways But if you start forgetting me I will try hard to do the same If you dare forget who I am I will try to forget your name But if each rose petal you kiss Feeds the fire in your soul Forever now, and through eternity With these arms I will hold Love can never be forgotten Memories can't fade from hearts door If you set sail your boat on this ocean Leave me not on distant shore [This message has been edited by Paul D. Hennigan (03-02-2009 01:47 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul D. Hennigan, You have some nice thoughts here. Always capitalize you first person singular personal pronoun "I". Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some very nice thoughts here Paul. A look at life's extension in love. I like that. Guess you must have gone back and done the corrections....(smile)... Eric |
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