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Open Poetry #44

Snow

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2009-02-26 02:06 PM

Snow

The ballet of white
Burns it's impression
Deep inside my mind

Every snow fall
I know my heart breaks

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-02-26 04:38 PM

Yo dear Juju,

I'm with you Hon. Snow makes life miserable for many people.

Love Bobby

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2009-02-26 05:21 PM

Interesting how things, or even seasons, can trigger memories that can be heartbreaking..

Nicely done, juju

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

3 posted 2009-02-26 05:34 PM

short and sweet. So good, it made me lvoe snow, even though right now I'm terribly sick and tired of #%&@ winter. Heh heh.

Simply beautiful.

"Now if I seem to be afraid
to live the life that I have made in song,
well it's just that I've been losing for so long" -Jackson Browne 'These Days

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2009-02-26 06:08 PM

Succinct but full of deep feeling.

Very nice indeed.

Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2009-02-26 06:34 PM

Juju - with all the snow we've had here it's getting pretty depressing to say the least, nice write...

BC

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