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My Favorite Girl
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My Favorite Girl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I was once in heaven one silent cool winter day I saw you there waiting on my best, in a soft shield of tenderness. We were wrapped in satin sheets could hear our heartbeats talk I reached for you and smiled. Then I imagined we were in a timeless stream that we were an endangered king and queen this filled the image with fear. That fact that we were superior and noble but so afraid. Did we have servants of the kind and loyal type and if so, where were they? Suddenly! I was taken with shock as the worst of the servants, an evil bard, was quoting the first bard's black MacBeth while holding a sword over your neck. I reached for you across the bloody bed screamed at the world....! I woke up! Always protecting you.... beside my favorite girl. You gave me smiling looks and reached to stroke my face, long strokes, long and smooth, full of lazy love. For all our years you'd proved yourself my comfort lady. You whispered in my ear, familiar love, you said, "come to me, I'm going crazy!" I pulled you to my chest and kissed your words, now I'm going crazy! or is this still a dream? then, I manage to know I'm raising up to roam the meadow, so this can't be a dream, as I pressed hard, again, I heard you say, "come to me, I'm going crazy." I could feel the flames of passion devouring my thighs as your velvet skin lay exposed before me the fire within blazing hot! A droopy eyed smile filled your face. Suddenly you're in my arms, your wine flavoured tongue probing mine.... then I hear you loud and clear, "The kids are late for school!" I wake up to see my favorite girl, saying... "The kids are late for school!" she says, half smiling as if she knew where we'd just been. [This message has been edited by ethome (02-26-2009 01:18 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
cute!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks! So are you! Eric |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Shanks!! I'll takes me kisses where I kin git'em...... Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Eric, This is interesting. I'd break your first stroph up into smaller ones. Bobby |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, those dreams that are more real than we sometimes might handle...  Enjoyed this. Been having a few dreams myself, lately...  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You must be a riot to share a bed with!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Bobby Thanks for the input. I know you're right but this is sort of a narrative ramble and that's the way it came out. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Karilea Yeah the dreams can be wild sometimes but you know, they're fodder for some weird verse or whatever you call this mess. I call it a ramble. Always appreciate your visits. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Michael.....(smile).... Yep, the key word being riot. Good to hear from you. Sorry to hear about the jockey that fell of the horse. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - h'mmmmm, now I know what you do in the early morning.... And watch those kisses my friend, they can be very sweet... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill Thanks for the visit and the comments. I am watching out for those kisses so I can get as many of them as possible.....uumm uumm good.....(smile).... Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I pulled you to my chest and kissed your words" ~ I'm talking! I'm talking! "I could feel the flames of passion devouring my thighs as your velvet skin lay exposed before me the fire within blazing hot!" ~ Temperature's a risin'!!!   Linda P.S. It appears to me that you are as chilvarous in your dreams as you are in real life! ~ Are you as hot during your waking hours as you are in your dreams? lol |
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