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Open Poetry #44

Extinguished fire

gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26

Posts 117

0 posted 2009-02-25 12:36 PM

How long can I watch the sun as it sets?
The white clouds help us believe
In the years together we’ve spent
Now they are slowly drifting apart
The rain they left in this shadow
The happiness that has went away

Now where has the breeze blown me to?
The lost faith I’ve gained over this extinguished fire
The spark that wasn’t lit
How long do I have to be gone away?
I don’t want to feel the pain
Of this lonely place they call “Shame”

This place I don’t feel like I belong
I can’t believe this is true
The heart I wanted to feel
Is it real?
How far away?
What’s the price of something this good?
How many times may I ask?
Is it real?
To me it’s everything I want to find
Everything is her heart
The heart that keeps me up praying ill find it one day
The heart that keeps me up late at night

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2009-02-25 12:53 PM

Lovely

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

tao power
Member

since 2009-02-24

Posts 109

2 posted 2009-02-25 03:33 AM

this poem is so very sad. That's all I can say about it.

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