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Open Poetry #44
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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2009-02-24 07:30 PM


howard :

                          it's pretty much a blur

                          but if you still want to listen

pete :

                          sure

howard :

                           well it all started about 4 years ago

                           when i realized i had more years to go

                           and despite more fears at that time

                           than i cared to acknowledge

                           i decided to take it slow

pete :

                           i bet you were divided

                                              [shrugs]

                           i had to ride it out

pete :

                           you could've denied it

howard :

                           and leave her with doubts?

                           no, it was better this way

                           who knows?

                           maybe she'll take off her sweater this way

pete :

                           well, if you do get her this way

                           i'd be more than happy to contact Morris Publishing

                           i'm sure they'll accept your letters this way

howard :

                                                       thanks Pete



                                                                                                                         love,

                                                                                                                         eve & howard

                          


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-02-24 08:53 PM

Yo Howardtsu,

This would be an easier, and more effective read if you got rid of all the white space.

Bobby
Blood.Wolf
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since 2009-02-09
Posts 54
GA, USA
2 posted 2009-02-24 08:54 PM

I agree with Bobby.  Maybe if you cleared out a bit of that double-spacing...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2009-02-28 05:31 AM

Howard.. as always, I loved your words xxx

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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4 posted 2009-03-02 04:58 PM

thanks roniece      

i'll see what i can do bobby & blood.wolf

but you know what they say about double spacing ....       
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