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Halo
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Halo |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Halo Lost in my heart, lost in my heart never to be found lost in my heart, cost of my art follow it around You tell me to kneel to find out if it's real truth, in everything I feel bleeding on shining steel sharpened, the cold knife of night stabbing out the pretty sight of you in the halo of the sun and all of me you see all that's left of me has become numb We begin to believe in all who deceive a lie becomes a relief perfect, silently shaking in grief dull the pain that cogs up my mind blow out the white candles to find me steering my life with a halo and look at me here out of control, I fear I've nowhere to go Lost in my heart, lost in my heart sink without a sound lost in my heart, cost of my art bringing me down You tell me it's not real but I know how I feel truth, the beauty can heal the wounds, a broken seal cut down by the blades of time show me it can still be mine you, in the halo of the moon you're all I want to see all that's left for me will leave me soon Lost all but heart, lost all but heart bury it where it'll never be found lost it all, but my heart cork tossed and torn apart leaving me sitting, broken halo in hand can't even make a sound no, you'll never understand no, you'll never understand "Now if I seem to be afraid |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
Well written, but there's something about it that just doesn't seem too right... Interesting rhyme, though. |
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