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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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empty reflections a broken mirror in a bare room faded strawflowers in a shaft of cold sunlight dust in a long- forgotten teacup nothing and everything --- b. e. adams (2/22/2009) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice blues Zen. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Indeed it is. this is lovely, I like it. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - very vivid, well done... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Absolutely perfect!!! I'm trying to find this same minimalist approach that packs the emotional punch. Simply stunning, m'friend.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This one brought some very strong visuals of memories that dwell deep in a heart. Well done. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
what could be more lonely.. a dusty ,faded strawflower forgotten, except by the cold beam of a wintry sun. every word is perfect. Boshii2 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Midnitesun is correct...this is very Zen...a push to edge of mind-ness...enjoyed... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Absolute perfection, Bruce. I'm keeping this one. Ida |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A small slice of art. I can see it perfectly. latearrival |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bruce, powerfully sensitive images - reminds me of William Carlos Williams' "Red Wheelbarrow" one of my most favourite poems of all times. My favourite part is: "nothing and everything". My second favourite part is the rest of the poem. Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~yes~~  M |
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