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Wishing Well
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Wishing Well |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
A silver coin of moonlight sparkles deep in your wishing well eyes. How many wishes have drowned in you and what happens to wishes that die? How many wishes were granted? How many wished simply for luck? How many times must each wish be chanted? How many can I buy for a buck? Men fill your depths with their pittance in hopes that their wishes come true. They wish for the skies and a bird-like existence, and not for the waters of you. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
exquisite. Boshii2 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tao, This is beautiful! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 This write is wonderful! Welcome to the blue. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello tao power.... "A silver coin of moonlight sparkles deep in your wishing well eyes. How many wishes have drowned in you and what happens to wishes that die?" Beautiful images and much to think about in your question. Welcome to Pip. |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
tao very nice write..paul |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed. Ida |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice -Juju |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
This is crazy good. Way to have a killer first post... Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*wow* really really this is awesome  Welcome to pip! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes a single wish to read such words are good enough a wish as any. Depth and feeling .... great work! In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05 |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
thank you all very much. truly. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed it T...welcome to the blue zoo of pip.. |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
excellent work! seems like you put a lot of thought into this. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very much enjoyed your penning here my friend, a new talent shows and we again are blessed. Welcome to Passions, you will love it here, keep writing and sharing. Rick |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is such a beautiful poem!! Welcome to PIP. You will love it here. Hugs, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think you could have stopped after the first three lines-- "A silver coin of moonlight sparkles deep in your wishing well eyes. How many wishes have drowned in you" Not that I didn't enjoy the rest--I did.  But I've been known to order an appetizer sampler and forego dinner, too. So what do I know? Welcome to Passions. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Tao power, This works rather well. The repetition works well too. I like it loads. Who gets to keep the coins? Bobby |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Thought provoking, hm I get many visions while reading this. Wishing you well... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the poetic reasoning. Welcome to Passions. Everyone here is nice except me but I'll grow on you. I'm always looking for song ideas or hooks as they're called. The idea of "Wishing Well Eyes" just intrigues me no end....Hummm.. Very clever write. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
tao power - great write, glad I stopped by for a read... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Tao power you have written a great poem my friend, much enjoyed and a big welcome to PIP. Lindsay |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This is powerful tao power! One of those poems a poet wishes he had written. art |
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