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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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endless winter outside… shrill winter winds serenade a cold, thin ice-moon climbing leaden clouds that threaten to fall from the frozen sky inside… dead heart, hearth, and vacant chair as final companions --- b. e. adams (2/23/2009) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
bleak...sad...lonely. the images are crisp!  oh and COLD! lol |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Our northern and southern brothers and sisters seem to be able to handle it. I'd just as soon not. I couldn't take it. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'd have to ditto Susan, this reads bleak indeed, though it's fine stark winter imagery! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there is the right word...  stark.exactly but you paint a picture so well, and put me "right there" to see it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: One who conceives such exquisite poetic thoughts, can't ... I repeat ... can't have a dead, cold heart. Who do you think inspires you like this, dear Bruce? Angels walk with you they whisper into your ears of Nature's beauty Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think Margharita must be right, Bruce. You have a special gift. Ida |
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