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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Close these eyes With hope to find Glimpse of lives Left far behind A bit of sorrow Some of sad Alone tomorrows Missing what we had So long for now And always remember The love forever shall Keep us always together... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . For Haru and Ryo..... c2009 vduna Inspired-8 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done Victor M |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"A bit of sorrow Some of sad Alone tomorrows" ...I find this progression such an attention grabber...very nicely done...in a melancholy way |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice tender thoughts. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Inspired-8 - inspiring write, enjoyed it... BC |
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