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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Lacking that thing I don't know pain is an intrusion grown from a seed of discontent like a watermelon's greed swallowed ala la flagrant: nothing can replace nothing of expectant jubilance and thorns by any other name still stink up a rose. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"pain is an intrusion grown"...now that's a phrase worth quoting...excellent |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Karen.. I love to read your beautiful thoughts... Happy New Year my friend  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little k~ Man do I ever understand the pain of this one~ *Hug* yourself for me, k ? *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - understand and felt this one... BC |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Your thoughts are always mega-interesting, Karen. My favourite lines are: Lacking that thing I don't know Nothing can replace nothing - Owl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
These lines are unique and mood distilling..... from a seed of discontent like a watermelon's greed swallowed ala la flagrant: You've captured the pain here.....What can I say but hang in there cause this is well done! Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A special hug from me, Karen. Ida |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
How can petals so soft come from a branch with thorns, Why does the sweet smell need an armor of pain, Where did the idea of pleasure with pain get born, What pays for a soft sweet smell like a droplet of blood stain? Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"and thorns by any other name still stink up a rose. " and isn't that the truth M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Something can replace nothing too.  love you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
good to read you again M'lady... always thought provoking. you get me going.  |
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