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Open Poetry #44
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Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 62
Earth
0 posted 2009-01-03 05:07 AM

As you go about your day
Smile, laugh, and sing!
Don't let your frown
Bring everybody down

Just like the sun
If it were to shed a tear
The light on
My face
Would
Disappear

It's been a while since i've been on here, happy new year!

"Most people treat the present moment as if it were an obstacle that they need to overcome. Since the present moment is Life itself, it is an insane w
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Anniepimm
Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-03 08:30 AM

I love the short poems
And i like this one is short and to the point
Excellent write
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
2 posted 2009-01-03 12:55 PM

a very nice thought and I love your title...captivating
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-01-03 12:57 PM

Yes, very nice thought indeed.

Eric
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