Open Poetry #44 |
Hoping You Will Be In Touch |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hoping You Will Be In Touch Could you remember back When thoughts came to mind It had opened up our world All those places we could find We both took the journeys In using the same imagination Having touched in thoughts Minds strolling in conversation Back and forth many times Minds travelled to every scene We always had agreement As thoughts were clearly seen We made it easy to journey Venturing with mutual consent Thoughts consciously aware We were both happily content The yesteryears I reminisce Times we had shared so much As the new year began today I am hoping you will be in touch HopeĀ©2009 |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Hope, your poetry is as beautiful as I remember. What a lovely expression to start the new year with, hope. Lovely dear poet! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Just sweet wishes and remembrance in your poem, Hope. May this new year bring you happiness and wonder. Alison |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - I find this writing very touching, may you have a great new year... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a lovely way to express it! Excellent writing! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hoping you are able to keep in touch M |
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mandamaywhoviay Junior Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 12 |
This is so beautiful. =] I hope whoever this is to will remain in your life for a very long time. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thoughts...imaginations...memories...a beautiful subject matter for such a lovely write...here's to the hoping and the keeping...of being in touch...wonderful write |
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