Open Poetry #44 |
Beyond Sunday Thoughts |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beyond Sunday Thoughts Beyond the line, I worry about you even if truth is often held back. There is strength in smaller fragments and wisdom in the holding onto. A because, with no explanations needed. Behind hazel eyes are the thoughts that dream forevers, that discard the negatives and spirit today with understanding. Reaching out to time... for that is all we have. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You certainly are very understanding Maureen. Love the positive expression of that third verse. Even with a few holes in it some is always better than none. Eric |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A sincere wisdom in this and the really liked seeing the belief in the positives shine in this one. You showcase your insight well in the "smaller fragments" and the "holding onto wisdom". Very much enjoyed this side of you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ethome, not so much understanding as accepting the situation as is. Once you reach a certain age, there are more important things to think about and enjoy in life than the material. There will always be those holes ( I just try not to fall into them anymore) Thanks E M Mark, well I am just a small fragment of this world, so I try to hold onto as much wisdom as I have learned and that offered me when needed. Thanks Mark, great to see you here again. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your beyond Sunday thoughts, dear Maureen. They hold the sweet awareness of maturity, when the essential is recognized. Beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Reaching out to time... for that is all we have" ahhhh...the currency of our lives...amazing how it affects everything in the ways we spend it...excellent write... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - enjoyed the thoughts in this write. Hope you're well... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks again all. Wow Steven "ahhhh...the currency of our lives...amazing how it affects everything in the ways we spend it..." a wonderful response.. Could almost be inspired to write a poem called "The Currency of our Lives" M |
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