Open Poetry #44 |
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Nocturne Pour La Petite Morte |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
When the last Morning star softly fades in the dawning of the pale, misty light of the last summer morning; When the last blossom smiles in the last sun-ray, beaming, and the last story ends; with all hopes, and all dreaming; As the last swallow climbs on the last winds a'breathing, and the last butterfly lifts her wings, for the leaving... I shall love you, still. When the last Dragonfly spreads her wings in the warm glow, for to dart her last flight in the last flowering meadow; As the last leaves burn gold in the deep forest greening, and the last Bumblebee dreams her last, honeyed dreaming; As the last Swan glides down to the last river's wending, and the last crystal spring softly flows to its ending... I shall love you, still. When the last Rainbow smiles through the last gentle shower, and the last petal falls from the last fading flower; As the last Skylark lifts, in her last spiral weeping, And the last cloudling melts in the last azure deeping; When the last birdsong rings in the last woodland glading, and the last Eagle soars; her last, sad cry soft fading... I shall love you, still. When the last Mountain range crumbles down, swiftly breaching, and whatever might be, is now far from the reaching; When the last Ocean breaks the last wave, softly foaming, and the last Sea-birds cry on the last breeze a'roaming; As the last sands of time softly run to their dooming, with the last precious hours of the last day swift looming... l shall love you, still. When the last Sun is goldening, with the last dusk a'creeping, and the last Evening star shimmers to her last sleeping; As the last pale moon drifts to her last wane-some flowering, and the last twilight glim of the last day is lowering; As the last stars grow dark, with the last night a'deeping, and all that was once, is no more for the keeping... I shall love you, still. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I must admit that I was a little intimidated by the title because I don't know any foreign language but this is a masterpiece that I'm glad I ventured into! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
![]() I can't believe no one commented on this! This is simply gorgeous! Maybe the title makes people think that the poem is not in English? I dunno. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautifully written piece celebrating never ending love. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautifully rendered eternal love, that transcends matter and blooms across forever. Every stanza could stand on its own, but harmony unfolds along the whole poem. I really enjoyed it greatly. Love, Margherita |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
yes beautiful so beautiful so very beautiful Boshii2 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent!, Windhover. Ida |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
This poem is truly impressive! It's beautifully touching, and this is one of the few I know I will come back to and read again. As for the title, I expected a French poem. Also, I'm not too sure the title is appropriate either, I speak French and the title brought no expectation that were remotely close to what I found here. I'm glad I stopped by, nonetheless. Have a marvelous day! I look forward to reading your next one. Mark |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lovely.I am not a great lover of "love poems", but really enjoyed this touch. latearrival |
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