Open Poetry #44 |
Oh, Lady... |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
I gaze at you, and softly sigh; and in my mind I drift away to a secret place, where hopes and dreams lie safe from trammels of the day. A place where I can tend the flame I hold for you, so secretly; a place where I can quell the pain... Oh, Lady... Within this secret place, I sift the hopeless dreams that come, and pass; a small boy at a sweetshop window... nose pressed tightly to the glass. But, I am no tongue-tied, stumbling child unschooled in sensibility... but sense, by love, is soon defiled... Oh, Lady... This Ancient Mariner's Albatross, called unrequited love, has been my private ghost, for oh, so long; perhaps you've felt... perhaps you've seen the black despair, with velvet claw, come calling, surreptitiously; a word, a smile to show you care? Oh, Lady... Is it, but just my foolish hope I see soft-mirrored in your eyes? Your thoughts are veiled, l cannot tell; no hint... no clue to recognise. The chill, insistent seeds of doubt twine round... and then you smile at me, and my resolve comes crashing down... Oh, Lady... If, by some chance, you glance my way, and see my gaze... a world apart; Remember then, these few soft words... wrote by the hand... spoke by the heart. Weave me an exquisite spell from which, I never can be free... what might have been, were I more bold? Oh, Lady. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So, the time has come to be BOLD, dear Windhover! A very beautifully constructed poem, with a captivating content. Love, Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -Juju |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a gift that is far reaching |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Windhover - I'm glad you posted another, for this is most lovely... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"If, by some chance, you glance my way, and see my gaze... a world apart; Remember then, these few soft words... wrote by the hand... spoke by the heart. Weave me an exquisite spell from which, I never can be free... what might have been, were I more bold? Oh, Lady. " a very lovely ending~~ M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Still reading more of you.....be Bold! Be bold! This was written the day before my birthday! (its ok to wish and dream they are for me?) Every reader wants it to feel it was written for them.....the more I read, the more I am inspired! ~Hugs ~Arh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, wow... that's one gorgeous take on unrequited love! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful poem - sad but beautiful. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARCTIC WIND HAPPY ST.PATRICK'S DAY |
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EvanescenceShy New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 8 |
I like your literary allusions. Nice flow, too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and then you smile at me, and my resolve comes crashing down... " oh yes.... I know this well |
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