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Open Poetry #44

MANY SINGNED BATTLE FLAG RISING SUN

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-02-22 02:46 AM

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Elephant grasses—

In a wind
Over soldiers’ bones

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Bob K
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 4208

1 posted 2009-02-22 06:36 PM

Dear Huan Yi —

This is a very moving piece of work. I think it expresses what seem to me to be your core themes with remarkable spareness. It is warrior's work, and worth being proud of. Thank you.

Bob Kaven

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2009-02-22 07:11 PM

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Bob,

Thank you

The title is a direct paste
from an ebay offering originating
in Japan. The allusion to Basho
is intentional.

Thanks again

John

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2009-02-22 07:27 PM

VERY effective minimalism.

much applause!!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2009-02-22 08:25 PM

Compelling.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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