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Sunday..................(Rictameter)
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Sunday..................(Rictameter) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Sunday Sunday I sit and pray, to talk to you my lord. A day full of grace and virtue. So many questions I need answers too. I know Lord, you have the answers. Please keep me safe tonight, on the night of Sunday. AMEN ARCTIC WIND |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's just too cute altogether. Gotta love those tykes don't ya? Eric |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A style I have never attempted .... ( too long winded ) ha ha. Such softness and appeal to this piece. Beautifully done. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"So many questions I need answers too." me too  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amen! Dear Michael, this is a gem my dear young friend, a true gem. Compliments for both the form, the content and the picture. You are beautiful. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is one cute poem Michael, You wrote it well. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aww, AW, this is totally precious!!!  Love & Child Light, EA  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Artic Wind, This is a nice poem. Yes, it's a "rictameter" all right. Love Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
perfect form...beautiful words...one of which I struggled with (the word 'too). Couldn't figure out if you meant it as 'also' or if you used it as 'to'. Decided I liked it either way, but then decided I liked it best as you wrote it. Doubly nice! Thank you for sharing... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Artic Wind - amen, amen... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
so sweet....conversation with our heavenly father morning, noon, and night! Hugs..ARH~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Amen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunday, and every night, AW.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ethome! Yes, LOL thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Mark **giggle** Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
SEA! ~ Hopefully they will be answered for you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marghertia! ~ WOW! thanks so much, this means a lot! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Passing Shadows! Thanks for the love ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Vandana! Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LindsayP Thanks so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA ~ Why thank you! Amen lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Robert Jordan! Yes! LOL thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Steavenr Why thank you kind poet! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Bill! Amen Amen to your reply  thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARH ~ All hours of the day! ~ I enjoyed writing this piece, it made me connect deeper into my faith. Thank you dear friend  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael Thanks! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Dark Star Thanks so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sunshine! Oh yes, can't forget that! Thanks! ARCTIC WIND |
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