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Marchmadness
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0 posted 2009-02-19 02:10 AM


The butterfly of truth
lands on the lips
of those who speak with integrity
as character rises to the occasion.
Though truth may be locked away,
it shines like a diamond on display.

                           Ida

© Copyright 2009 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2009-02-19 02:20 AM


Ida....did you watch that movie? Gives me chills like this poem

well done!

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-02-19 08:12 AM


Beautifully written, Ida! Yes indeed, the truth does shine like on display.
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2009-02-19 10:28 AM


Nice images in this one, I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-02-19 10:33 AM


Yo dear Ida,

I don't understand this one at all.

I saw the movie once, and kinda forgot it.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-02-19 01:50 PM


This is of great impact, dear Ida.
So totally incisive.
Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-02-19 02:02 PM


Thank you all for reading and commenting.
This poem is for Kacy, Linda, Maureen, John, and Alison.
                            Ida

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7 posted 2009-02-19 03:13 PM


Ida, my Belle, you truly are a diamond.


Linda


ethome
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8 posted 2009-02-19 03:20 PM


Yes, yes, the truth is so important.
It can't stay hidden because it's the truth......That word integrity is an important quality all should display. The world would be a much better place.

Sometimes one has to work on the good things in life and develop them fully.

Eric

gilead
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9 posted 2009-02-19 05:27 PM


Truth is indeed like a brilliant diamond on display, Ida, and when it shines we must not resist and be blinded by it; that's when the darkness reigns, and we fail to see things the way they are, especially ourselves.

art

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10 posted 2009-02-19 09:17 PM


Ida,

You wrote it well.  Thank you.

Alison

Suncleaver
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11 posted 2009-02-20 05:23 AM


Great work Ida, I love the imagery.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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12 posted 2009-02-20 09:48 AM


ida, was moved by your poem...wrote one myself...with the same name! it, too, dealt with the subject of truth...war...and the nations children.
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2009-02-20 01:30 PM


Ida - now this is a magnificent writing. I'm glad you posted it...

BC

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