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Longing
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Longing |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
I reach for the sky, I remember your every sound I reach for the past, I remember our every frown... A breach of trust, some fraudulent intent. To a greater extent, no elixir found for this torment This passage is dark... like scripts from the middle-ages The depiction of chalk line’s and a blue mist makes a real need for change in my future description I'm the colossus in a coliseum of boredom! Recklessness contoured the cosmos into a cauldron of disease and doubt. The very thing used to with-hold my true passion. When can we see each other again? When love is real it's awesome, but does it make you give in? Our end, was so deep I lost my way Couldn't even sit and pray Emotion forged in the heart Something I wanted from the start The very thing I thirsted for, tore me apart. I account for the many days since I have felt alright It's awful wishing no one witnessed the sight of me confused, Holding concealed the fire in me that burned. These prison walls contain the condensation of tears Contain my adolescent attempts at our relationships arrangement degrading this wide spread devastating diction Beyond comprehension my soul abandoned avidity Love that is divine, highlights smiles and shines the schismatic of love makes this skeptic surrender the nasty nature of love made me snap a violent volcano with no option but to erupt An oracle foresees my opposition as powerless a visual frame of rapturous radiance, untouchable. A violent velocity of verbal virtue, is spiteful. My thoughts of ending this wrongful existence with switched lanes, grinded gears, a grab of the wheel Along with the crash and squeal, bright lights, a dash of glass and a splash of real, to me are surreal. Why dial a phone that no one answers and cry by the sunrise? Why do we die to live, when all life dies? - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Intense...the darker side of love, the side that most always brings pain and regret. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I could have identified with this when I was young, but the older you get you realize love should never take work, or make you feel bad, or sad. It is the ultimate glue I think at keeping us sane. |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Thx for the feed all. |
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