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Whau2251 Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17Hanford,California,U.S.A. |
You don't even remember me Forget all the memories You broke my heart Shatter my life and brought me pain Everytime I think of you Tears and suffering come to me I don't know what to do but kill myself The only thing that seems to matter in this world, is you and you've left me Didn't even care I'm so confused Was it true that when I was thinking of you and loving you, You were cheating on me? You have killed my soul and heart I don't know no if I................ can go on ------------------ *OoOoAudrey AuoOoO* "Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive." |
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oasis1352 New Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 5littleton,CO,USA |
I hope that no one has cheeted on you it is one of the worst feelings I know. I like your writing and hope to read more |
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oasis1352 New Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 5littleton,CO,USA |
I hope that no one has cheeted on you it is one of the worst feelings I know. I like your writing and hope to read more ------------------ Love: "Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one." |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Wow. this is exactly how i felt last year when my (ex) b/f cheated on me and we broke up. i thought that i couldn't go on with out him. and i have the scars on my arms to prove it. i loved him so much but he never returned it. this is a very good poem. i hope you don't stll feel this way because, eventually you'll get over him. i know. it took me months, but i did. i wish you the best and keep writing  ------------------ Jamie ~don't let your love pass you by....~ |
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