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Should I ring???
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Should I ring??? |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
It's been almost a year and i haven't seen a day yet when i haven't thought of you and i wonder, do u ever think of me? Do u even remember? well me, I remember it all every look every word and the only goodbye I tried to forget about it so that I could forget the pain but the scars are still here And there's something inside that's not right I think it would heal if I talked to u once more I know I want to ring But i dont know what to say I have no reason apart from the fact that I just can't get over you I'm hoping then I can forget this But maybe it will make it deeper? I don't even know what you're thinking would you want to talk to me? should i bother? I know it would be hard but something's telling me i have to call I won't plan what to say I'll just say what's on my mind And i want to apologise one last time To say the things I never had a chance to say An unrushed goodbye A sincere wish that you have a nice life Words that aren't physically attached I thought I should give u time to forgive me All I can do is hope that a year was long enough |
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maskeraid New Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 3 |
for what it's worth, I called, and my life changed for the better |
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Mya15 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 16Sunrise,Fl,33351 |
I think that you should call. A chance at true love is not often so if you think this is your match, call. About your poem, I liked it. I'm not too good at writing unrhymed poems and I don't really like too many that don't rhyme, but this one touched me all the same. |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
If I did call it wouldn't be to get back together with him or anything because now he is on the other side of the world  So it'd be just like..how are you..etc etc..and i really don't know how he'll react..it's been a year since we've seen each other..I really don't know what to do! it's a complicated situation with a really long story behind it so if this all doesnt make sense that's why! I have a friend who's on exchange at his school right now and he is going to ask him to email me..so i guess i'll see what happens from there? If anyone else loves, loved, or think they loved someone that's really really far away..u know how hard it is and write back to me and tell me ur story coz i don;t know anyone who's been thru what I have! luv yas all Anna |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
Maskeraid>I'm so happy for you! What happened?..like were you fighting or something?? sorry just interested! Mya15> thankyou very much! I don't think he is my true love...I did b4 but I can see now that he isn't..but I do think I need to say a proper goodbye..but it's not as easy as that ..unfortunately! |
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