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My Little Secret |
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Whau2251 Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17Hanford,California,U.S.A. |
The feelings I once had for you were so strong You liked another girl made my stomach hurl forgot about you denied the truth that I still liked you Fell in a trans with someone else Thought it was the best but it wasn't I wanted him to be like you Wishing and Wishing It didn't quite happen I told him I liked him Which was a total sin I'm utterly confused Don't wanna be amused Why does it gotta be this way? Hide my feelings Not wanting anymore screw-ups Ya see, I realized Looking in hie eyez was look thru nice eyez But looking at your eyez, Heaven was calling out My heart stopped Knees weak, my breath tooken away Butterflies in my stomach I like you more but I can not tell Can't let anything happen so that's why, It's my little secret ------------------ *OoOoAudrey AuoOoO* "Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive." |
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Raven Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 67Hopewell Jct, New York, USA |
I felt the exact same way last year, I've never heard a poem that came so close to my own feelings! Basically I really liked this guy alot, but he liked my best friend. I couldn't tell him I liked him right? I mean, here I was listening to him tell me how much he loved "her". It hurt to hear the truth, so I avoided him and pretended to hate him. It was a stupid thing to do. It sucks when you fall in love with someone who's already in love. *~*~*Raven*~*~* ------------------ "They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Man, this really hit close to home for me. I have been there and it is extremely difficult. Wonderful job on making the feeling come alive. (although its not one we want to have). Keep up the good work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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