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unspoken feelings

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-09-11 03:16 PM

Your silence makes my heart sore,
wondering if your happy,
im really not sure.
The expression on your face,
so serious and cold.
Hardly ever smiling,
even when i grab your hand to hold.
Forever is what we always say,
but what if one day you go away?
I know i will never,
i couldnt stand the thought,
even when i think of all the tears you have brought.
And now i lay me down to sleep,
I pray the Lord,
my heart you'll keep.

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

1 posted 1999-09-11 03:18 PM

You are very talented.

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-09-11 11:01 PM

Beautiful, I can relate to your sentiments.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

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