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Whau2251
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17
Hanford,California,U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-06-25 08:23 PM


I wrote this when I was depressed and suicidal:


Fire, burn
I hate this world
I don't want to live this life
I put on a smile
But its not me
The real me,
I hate.

Blood slowly dripping from my flesh,
To the bare ground
How come hurt feels so good
As my blue veins pop out,
I can feel my pulse thru my fingertips
So strong
Numb
black and blue
Why do I do this?
I don't know

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*OoOoAudrey AuoOoO*
"Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive."

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Raven
Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
1 posted 1999-06-30 05:50 PM


Wow, your poem really touched me. Doesn't it seem we all put on a false face? It's sad so many of us can't be ourselves...including myself at times. Thanks for sharing


*~*Raven*~*

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

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