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since 1999-06-21
Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA

0 posted 1999-06-25 12:41 PM

This is for my best friend who died 2 years ago....

Dear Stephanie
Hey cousin, can you hear me?
How are you today?
Thanks for asking- I'm ok.
It's gray outside
As the squirrels run and hide,
I watch them from the window
My sorrow I do not show
You're in a place you don't belong
What happened was wrong
I just wanted to say hi.
I just want to be able to say good-bye

The world wasn't ready for an angel

~don't let your love pass you by....~

[This message has been edited by abra-cadabra (edited 06-25-99).]

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1 posted 1999-06-25 12:06 PM

Sorry to hear about the loss of your friend, abra-cadabra. I don't think the world is ever ready for an angel...

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since 1999-06-20
Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A
2 posted 1999-06-25 08:24 PM

It is such a hard thing to loose someone you love. Your poetry is beautiful, and I can easily relate to it. Good job!


since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
3 posted 1999-06-30 05:55 PM

I really liked this poem, although you wrote it during a very sad time I'm sure. The world may never be ready for an angel, but so many ordinary people walking around today can be considered angels, to good for this world. Heaven must have been calling your cousin, they must have seen she was truly an angel.

~*~ Raven ~*~

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