What do you dream at night?

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Teen Poetry #1

What do you dream at night?

Gedanken
Junior Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 16
New york

0 posted 1999-09-09 02:12 PM

After Dark

A dream came to me last night in bedIt was a complex disorder of confusion and dread

I walked down the darkness where light could be felt

Nothing could talk but at my foot they all knelt

Asking in tounges not known to me

I only marvled at what my eyes could now see

I lifted my head to see a whole in the light

It was a woman steping out into my sight

I walked into the dark light to touch her hand

Like i was acting on an unsaid command

In her eyes all the worlds i could see

She spoke and said, do you want to be with me

She reached inside me and took hold of my heart

And till this day i dream this dream everynight after dark

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beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-13 09:21 PM

I like sir. What a cool poem is all I really have to say. 'Tis an intriguing (sp?) dream but it would suck to have every night.

You have much talent. Good job!

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