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What has our friendship become?
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What has our friendship become? |
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Raspberme Junior Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 21South Hill, WA, USA |
This poem I made for a friend of mine that I'm not sure is my friend or not. --- Our friendship was strong, you know, We never were apart; But know I don't know, Are we still friend and how could we come apart? We see eachother in the halls, but don't bother to say hi; We don't bother to make calls, and don't bother to say bye. What has our friendship become? Lost, unkown, or nothing? My worried soul is afraid to lost our frienship, Yet my mind says this is just a temparary bump in our relationship. Please tell me what our friendship is suppose to be, or even is. Many of your friends fell, that you have zoned us out; Is this real, or is this just something to go 'bout? How did this happen to us, our friendship is so little now; We don't even talk a murmur, this all came to me like a POW! This lonely feeling, scares me somehow; How shall I be dealing, especially right now? ------------------ Raspberme |
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Raspberme Junior Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 21South Hill, WA, USA |
Could u guyz/galz plese tell me if this sounded mean? the friend i gave it to says it was very mean, and i don't think it is. so please tell me! latz! ------------------ "A fine guy can open your eyes, a smart guy can open your mind, but a sweet guy can open your heart" ~Raspberme |
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