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Teen Poetry #1

Autumn Leaves

invertigo18
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 03:58 PM

Death brings forth life in autumn leaves.
They fall to the ground as the tree grieves.
You're the tree and I'm the ground.
And I'll console you when you I've found.

And as the wind blows
Your tears flow
And I the ground
Will guide you down
To the deep roots of your long lost joy.

I know you can find the strenght to stand.
And when you're down I'll hold your hand.
As you cry your autumn leaves.

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Luke Cakalic

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-16 05:16 PM

I really enjoyed your choice of words. It was beautifullly written.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-07-23 02:19 AM

one of my favs, giving it another bump to the top for those who don't go back and read the oldies...::smiles::

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

3 posted 1999-08-11 01:29 PM

Once again, Krista & I have found your work worthy of applause! We must like the same kind of poetry - her & I.....YOURS!

Very exquisite piece...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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