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First Writing - Desire
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First Writing - Desire |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
This is my first posting of a writing of mine, please feel free to critique or compliment, i love feed back on my writings. Just a little background on this writing. *I wrote this about 2 wks. ago. Its about a girl i just recently began talking with, ive 'known' her for about a year, but only within the past 3 months have we begun talking. Ive taken quite a liking to this girl, she is sweet, smart, has beautiful eyes and she must certainly be the nicest person i know. Only one problem...we're only friends and she repeatedly falls for these guys that do her no good, only harm... Desire Walking through a lonely field, Dark skies, dark clouds, So ferociously and utterly blanked, Your astounding glance parts the clouds so quickly, The stars shine through the dark clouds, Illuminating the dark skies. A beautiful world for such a beautiful girl, I promise you this and so much more, Forget the foolish standards you've set for yourself, I'll never leave your side, Hand in hand, Stride for stride. Thoughts of embracing you quiver me, Unparalleled warmth glistens in your eyes, Such fine eyes, So entrancing they are, Rest well for I'll not go back on my word, I desire your fair lips touch, This I desire, Oh so much. ~-~-~The Keeper Of Keys~-~-~ |
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