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Teen Poetry #1

I dont know

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-09-02 06:58 PM

I don’t know what to do
I pour my heart out to you
You just take it
You give no return
You don’t seem to mind
But I’m not sure
I can’t tell

You’re driving me crazy
Cause I love you so
You just soak it up
Like some sort of sponge
You might love me too
But I’m not sure
I can’t tell

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-09-02 08:58 PM

Excellent work, my friend!! Its so hard to know sometimes...welcome to Passions! Post more, post more!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 39

2 posted 1999-09-02 09:27 PM

That was excellent. I share the same experiences that you write of...check out my post, it's of the same nature, but not so 'negative'. Not dissing you though, it was really good.

~-~-~The Keeper Of Keys~-~-~

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