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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-02 01:48 PM

Sit beside me, burn inside me, I just need you near
Have some pity, you are witty and you have no fear
Hide me... hide me! Hide me silence I’m still afraid
You’re so pretty, help me city, I must face my fate

I’m burning from desire, but this fire feels so cold
Cupid’s arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world
Higher... higher... take me higher! This is not enough
I was honored with great sorrow I’m alone in love

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Raspberme
Junior Member

since 1999-09-04

Posts 21
South Hill, WA, USA

1 posted 1999-09-05 08:50 PM

This poem was great! You have your own style and you sound like a professional.

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Raspberme

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-09-06 12:29 PM

Thanks Ras, this one wasn't too complicated to write, read "I'm laughing at humanity"

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-09-19 01:13 PM

comments?

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-09-19 01:18 PM

I agree with Ras...you have your own...unimitable style.....I like it alot

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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5 posted 1999-09-19 01:47 PM

This is pretty close to perfection, Master. I can't wait to read your stuff when you are thirty!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-09-19 01:49 PM

THanks Caroline! How would you know how old I am now?

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-19-99).]

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

7 posted 1999-09-19 02:36 PM

pretty close to perfection... oh I failed again?

Blazer
New Member

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3

8 posted 1999-09-21 08:22 PM

You really are a master a writing poems.
I also have to agree with everyone else you do have your own stlye and it a great style.
keep on writing great poems

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

9 posted 1999-09-22 03:04 PM

Master, I read somewhere that you are 16. True? You are very talented but your arrogance is a bit off putting. Great writing!

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

10 posted 1999-09-22 04:15 PM

Yeah I'm 16, where did you read that? Thanks for the comments.

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