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since 1999-07-25
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Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 1999-08-30 07:03 PM

Born wild and free,
With a heart no man could tame.
Beauty and danger put together.
Beware, he that tries me!

An angry heart,
A rage terrible to behold.
My ice blue eyes tell of no pain.
Only a desire for revenge not yet mine.

I was born as this wild girl,
Young and free,
Age affects me in no way.
I go where I wish, do as I wish.

But my desire is still there.
While at the outside I am strong,
Inside I am longing,
For something more.

Others praise me,
Others yearn for me.
But there is only one I give my heart to.
Only one can tame my heart.

You calm me,
Soothe my rage.
Douse the fire that burns within me.
Cool love feels good.

I fear myself terriblly.
I long to be free of my own heart.
The day will come when Hate will leave.
And Happiness will reign.

© Copyright 1999 Venus - All Rights Reserved
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-31 02:14 AM

excellent work, Venus!

*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

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since 1999-08-23
Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA
2 posted 1999-08-31 07:52 AM

Very good work, Venus. Excellent.

Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

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since 2001-06-10
Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz
3 posted 2002-11-01 03:20 AM

nicely done.


what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

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since 2003-11-18
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4 posted 2003-11-24 10:48 PM

This is really strong writing almost makes me feel like its me..
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5 posted 2007-11-13 07:53 PM



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