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Venus Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 12Oklahoma, USA |
Born wild and free, With a heart no man could tame. Beauty and danger put together. Beware, he that tries me! An angry heart, A rage terrible to behold. My ice blue eyes tell of no pain. Only a desire for revenge not yet mine. I was born as this wild girl, Young and free, Age affects me in no way. I go where I wish, do as I wish. But my desire is still there. While at the outside I am strong, Inside I am longing, For something more. Others praise me, Others yearn for me. But there is only one I give my heart to. Only one can tame my heart. You calm me, Soothe my rage. Douse the fire that burns within me. Cool love feels good. I fear myself terriblly. I long to be free of my own heart. The day will come when Hate will leave. And Happiness will reign. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
excellent work, Venus! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Devin Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29Oviedo,Fl, USA |
Very good work, Venus. Excellent. ------------------ Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
nicely done. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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sweetkiss New Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 3Me, USA |
This is really strong writing almost makes me feel like its me.. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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