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Neha
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since 1999-08-24
Posts 8


0 posted 1999-08-24 07:33 AM


What is Friendship?
Does anyone know,
I Feel it's a word
Colder than snow.
Why I say is it is so cold,
That my friends is a thing to be told.
Some people find Friendship just a mere word
to use and fool,
Those people are the ones that make this world so UnCool.
Life can be full of pleasures and laughter,
Mirth and Joy,
But what is the meaning of all this without a very close friend with whom you enjoy.
Friendship Has definately lost it's meaning today,
And believe me when I tell you that when you find a true friend....
That'll be your happiest Day.

© Copyright 1999 Neha - All Rights Reserved
Sunflower
Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14
Front Royal, VA, USA
1 posted 1999-08-24 11:18 AM


Your poem is good...but I don't agree with it. I don't think that have the people that claim they are my friends really aren't. I don't understand, I guess, the meaning of this poem, because to me, it's not just a word. Oh well....good writing anyways! =o)
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