Torn Apart--please respond!!!

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Torn Apart--please respond!!!

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

0 posted 1999-08-23 08:08 AM

My life has been torn apart
Ripped to shreds
And yet,
It's strangely comforting
To find you standing there

What's true is now an illusion
Pulled over your eyes
To fool you
Mess with your head
What I thought was an illusion is now true
I now know the truth
Everything has changed
An illusion...

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

1 posted 1999-08-23 08:56 PM

I really like this poem, especially the part that says "And yet,
It's strangely comforting
To find you standing there"
I hope to see more of your poetry

Raven

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

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