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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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My pen drips blood onto the paper The verses that were hiding in my veins Mixed with the ink become much greater My wings drop off the heavy chains The virus leaves my system in my words And melts into the vapor in the air I warn you, do not catch my thoughts I beg you dreamers, please beware It is contagious and it’s hard to cure And only words can save the ill So poets, keep your writing pure And let your poems be your shield ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
very good writing. i liked the first few lines the best. awesome poem. i don't know why no one ever respondes to poems in this room. Swan ------------------ "I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Master, your poems are filled with powerful imagery. I enjoy reading your work. |
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