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Teen Poetry #1

A falling star

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-20 10:52 PM

The clouds were twirling, changing form
The stars were smothered all around
And silence screamed inside the storm
The sky was blending with the ground

The world was shocked to see this sight
And people stunned with sudden change
My pen could not portray this night
And not a word stayed on my page

The rain was pouring with great pressure
It silenced screams and cries and hoots
The evil moon observed with pleasure
As trees were overturned with roots

The thunder barked along with hounds
And lightning lit up skies afar
And through the barricades of clouds
I caught a glimpse of a falling star

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

1 posted 1999-08-21 12:49 PM

Your words make a common bond between life and love. Do you know what I mean? Well I loved your poem it was very good keep writing know matter what.
Love,
Neala

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-08-21 01:44 PM

THanks, only those that know how to love can show that it their poetry.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

3 posted 1999-08-21 11:42 PM

So true, even in the midst of chaos, we can find peace and beauty. Keep writing!

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-08-29 12:57 PM

This is an amazing piece of work. I would suggest that you post this to Open forum as well.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

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