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Devin
Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

0 posted 1999-08-23 08:17 AM


Happiness is a rare thing
Don't confuse it with fun
Everyone has masks
When you are truly happy--
Well, is anyone truly happy?
Or do they just put a mask of perkiness on?
Isn't it amazing how easily you can switch Masks?
Faster then a blink of an eye
So don't be fooled by my masks
If you're patient,
I'll reveal my true self
My fears,
Anxieties,
Loves,
Hope,
All that can be found Under my mask

© Copyright 1999 Devin - All Rights Reserved
Piggy169
Junior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 10
Belleville IL USA
1 posted 1999-08-24 12:21 PM


i really like your poem a lot! it is very true and the sooner people realize it the easier it will be for people to show thier true self
Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-08-24 12:26 PM


Ah yes, so many of us do indeed wear masks..only once they are removed can one truly be themselves. Exellent work, Devin.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 1999-08-24 08:45 PM


The only person who resoponded to mine was you they like your stuff not mine. Come over sometime when your perents get home.
Neala

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