Love's Garden (my first pantoum!)

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Teen Poetry #1

Love's Garden (my first pantoum!)

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-08-22 11:29 PM

Two kindred souls meet in this dazzling garden.
The wind caresses the night like a lover's sigh.
Once more two lonely strangers embrace again.
Upon the silken wings of angels love flies.

The wind caresses the night like a lover's sigh.
The stars the only witness as shadows slowly combine.
Upon the silken wings of angels love flies.
With a dew moistened kiss your passion is mine.

The stars the only witness as shadows slowly combine.
Rays of pale moonlight gently move over your face.
With a dew moistened kiss your passion is mine.
Your love touches my soul like a heavenly grace.

Rays of pale moonlight gently move over your face.
In your eyes crystal tears of joy brightly glisten.
Your love touches my soul like a heavenly grace.
To the beating of your honest heart I quietly listen.

In your eyes crystal tears of joy brightly glisten.
Once more two lonely strangers embrace again.
To the beating of your honest heart I quietly listen.
Two kindred souls meet in this dazzling garden.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Inamorata
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 2
Linwood,MN,USA

1 posted 1999-08-24 07:01 PM

Wow,It's a work of art

Keep it up Gurly

[This message has been edited by Inamorata (edited 08-24-99).]

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-08-24 09:20 PM

Thanks a lot, Er bear!! I appreciate it!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

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