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Kandi83
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 4
Phoenix, Az, US

0 posted 1999-08-19 11:00 PM


"Move on" is what you said to do.
I've been tryin'.
Everytime I hear your name,
I hope to hear you want me too.
I love you so, and would wait forever,
Just to hear you say four little words,
"I want you back".
You just don't understand,
You're everything I want,
Sweet, charming, loving....
Trusting, honest, caring....
Handsome, funny, sincere....
What more can a girl ask for?
What do I gotta do,
To make you want me too?
What do I have to say,
So you won't push me away?
I love you with every beat of my heart,
And not a day passes that you're not thought of.



[This message has been edited by Kandi83 (edited 09-06-99).]

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Piggy169
Junior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 10
Belleville IL USA
1 posted 1999-08-20 12:52 PM


i hope things work out your poem really touched me i have been in the same situation and all i can say is hang in there and leave him alone if it was meant to be it will work out if it wasn't something better will come along
Kandi83
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 4
Phoenix, Az, US
2 posted 1999-08-22 01:53 PM


Thank you. I hope things work out too.
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