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Teen Poetry #1

I stood beside her...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-19 01:54 AM

I stood beside her, looking fine
Although as hopeless as it seems,
She dreamt three years of being mine
My looks had justified her dreams

Her eyes were burning with a flare
I was the reason for this burning
She gave my chest a hungry stare
And I could understand her yearning

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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-20-99).]

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

1 posted 1999-08-20 02:18 PM

What do you think?

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I fell in love and kept on falling

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